Posts Categorized: JMC 3343-995
I Shot The Sans Serif. Oops!
Watch the video below of my efforts and check out the game for yourself! Can you beat my score?
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Writing with clarity
Poor: She was in bed watching her puppy with a bag of chips.
Wait. Who has the bag of chips? ‘She’ or the puppy?
Better: She was in bed with a bag of chips watching her puppy.
Reducing Clutter
Poor: I dropped out of school on account of the fact that I joined the circus.
This has too many words.
Better: I dropped out of school to join the circus.
Sentence Variety
Poor: My roommate is Casey. She went to buy toilet paper.
This can easily be one sentence.
Better: Casey, my roommate, went to buy toilet paper.
Sentence Emphasis
Poor: My mom called me today to tell me that my sister received her college acceptance letter today!
What is more important? That my mom called me? Or that my sister was accepted to college?
Better: My sister was accepted into college today, my mom confirmed.
Bootcamp Reflection
The toughest part of this unit was working through the multiple Lynda videos. A few times I realized I had stopped paying attention and had to rewind the video a few times.
All in all, I managed to keep my cool throughout this unit’s assignments, I even managed to help a fellow classmate out in the process. I’ll enjoy the calm because I know there’s a storm coming. I’m sure I’ll be feeling in over my head in a few short weeks (days). Let’s do it!
Design Blitz
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Color
Color is one of my favorite parts of design. I moonlight as a painter (it’s one of my favorite hobbies), and I love experimenting with color. Color also alway drawn me to art, graphics, and publications. The book I’m currently reading is a great example of color. It boasts an electric read which draws the readers eye and the splash of yellow carries the eye to focus on Mario Goetze. With the black typeface, the colors play on the colors of Germany’s flag. Typography Minimalism & Use of Space Proportion Unity All in all, I have realized I enjoy colorful, clean designs. Not sure if I’ll ever again be able to look at the cover of a book without thinking about these different aspects of design . |
Who? Me?
Correction:
Home:
Jazzed and Motivated:
Writing:
A Professional Portrait:
Who am I:
What I believe:
What I do:
What guides and motivates me:
Where design fits in my life:
Typography Games
Next I tried Type Connection and I’ll be honest, I think I really missed the purpose of this particular game. I was playing matchmaker and paired up Univers with Maple – a perfect match in my humble opinion – but the game eagerly told me how wrong I was. I decided that I didn’t agree with their logic so I moved on to the next game.
I moved on to Type War (because I couldn’t get Poster Letters to launch). I was really struggling at the beginning. I don’t think I got one answer correct, so I went back and read the explanation of the game on canvas and saw the hint to pull up Word. With Word by my side I fared much better.
As much as I enjoy playing around with fonts, I think I’ll stick to non-typography based games when I’m looking for entertainment. I will say, however, that it was great practice in seeing the subtleties between various fonts.
Reflection
I remember the Inverted Pyramid being at the heart of news writing, but upon reviewing it a second time around in this course I realized how important it is to all professional writing.
I’m looking forward to using this concept in our first written assignment next week. Practice is the best way I learn, so I can’t wait to use these concepts to craft news releases in the next unit.
Writing Effectively
Poor:The dog was walked by a man who was tall.
Better: The tall man walked the dog.
Reducing Clutter
Poor: Because of the late hour of the day, everyone was asleep.
Better: It was late so everyone was asleep.
Sentence Variety
Poor: I walked to the store. I bought milk. I drank the milk.
Better: I went to the store to buy milk and drank it when I got home.
Sentence Emphasis
Poor: Jordan the Soonerthon chair said that Soonerthon would try and fundraise 100 thousand dollars on Jan. 25.
Better: Soonerthon will try and fundraise 100 thousand dollars on Jan. 25 said the Soonerthon chair.












