Letterhead Draft 1 and Business Card Revisited

This week in PR pubs we were asked to make revisions to our business card and make a first draft of a letterhead. First, I made some changes to my business card based on the feedback I got from my classmates on Thursday. Overall, everyone liked my design for a business card, but there was a common them in the suggestions I got back from them. I seemed I needed to make some of the text stand out a little more.

With my second draft, I tried to break up the text a little bit using better proximity and make the contact information a little bigger. I also wanted to build up the brand of this business even though it doesn’t exist yet (so don’t try to visit that website or email me at the one on the business card because those don’t exist either).

The other assignment for this week is a letterhead and during today’s class, I put this together. I feel like it might be a little empty and plain and I also wasn’t sure what font to use for the body copy since on everything else I’m using Helvetica. But that just makes me more excited to get feedback from my peers on Thursday! I think I reacted this way is because there seems to be so much more going in my business card than in my letterhead so maybe I need to find a happy medium between the two…?

Also, pay no attention to the actual message in the letter because it has nothing to do with Native Coffee or PR Pubs.